Does This Paragraph make sense?! plz help with my punctuation? Re-write if possible!?

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We smile because we are happy, And we frown because we are sad.
But Studies showed that our emotions are reinforced by their correspoding facial expressions.

So if you were in a bad mood the best thing to do is SMILE, don’t feel like smiling? then just fake a smile. your brain wouldn’t know the diffrence and your body will start producing a hormone called “serotonin” which is also known as the HAPPY HORMONE and in no time, you will find that your fake smile transformed into a real one!!

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Answer by Samuel 1234
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By our corresponding*
The rest seems fine, make sure to use Full stops and Capital letters though. Nice work

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